DaoistauXJUR

DaoistauXJUR

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2021-07-09 Joint Global
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DaoistauXJUR
DaoistauXJUR
1 years ago
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DaoistauXJUR
1 years ago
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1+ In Demon Slayer world, just one or two partners that goes with his journeys and become stronger with him is enough whether that person is a human or a demon. But if you decided to stick with the MC having 2 partners then better be that they're human and demon as it can give spice to the story.

DaoistauXJUR
DaoistauXJUR
1 years ago
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Mischa is jelly😂

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DaoistauXJUR
1 years ago
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It would be nice if there is a full version of this as a side stories

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DaoistauXJUR
1 years ago
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This time skip is getting annoying. Skipping without much explanation/description about what happens within that time is getting really annoying.

DaoistauXJUR
DaoistauXJUR
1 years ago
Commented

Vanessa, you're so innocent, so cute🤣🤣🤣

Three minutes later, Father and Mother enter the chamber. They look a little flushed and their skin has a faint shine to it. They must have fallen asleep under a blanket or something. Considering Mother, it's not that unusual, but it's quite a warm season right now.

I Own a Brothel in Another World

I Own a Brothel in Another World

Fantasy · Saileri

DaoistauXJUR
DaoistauXJUR
1 years ago
Commented

Evil scientist? Nah, she's just a cute imouto. Sadistic? yah, no doubt. Taking over the world? She already did and will continue until everyone worship her beloved Onii-chan😂

DaoistauXJUR
DaoistauXJUR
2 years ago
Posted

It's really good, the world building is superb, the character design is Noice👌👌👌, the story pacing is great, it's has politics, conspiracy, mystery, BUT, BUT when Han Sen goes outside of the sanctuary, the story becomes a mess, the politics is nonexistent, there's no conspiracy only mindlessly brute force anything, the MC gains powers so easily that the hard work of everyone who trains for thousands of years seems meaningless. He has ALOT, ALOT, ALOT, ALOT OF PLOT ARMOR that would put to shame the Huckbuster Suit of Iron Man, the sudden power up, luck that has no equivalent. HE JUST ENTIRELY RELY ON LUCK ON EVERY SITUATION AND AGAIN JUST TO BRUTE FORCE EVERYTHING AND ANYONE! On the first half of the story it's really great but when it comes to the second half of the story it's just goes to shit, LITERALLY, JUST STRAIGHT UP GOES TO SHIT!

DaoistauXJUR
DaoistauXJUR
2 years ago
Posted

Yandere wives! + Yandere Mother-in-law! + Crazy MC! + Unique world building! = Awesome Story! Yeah! It's an awesome Story! (Spoiler: as the novel's quote says ''IMPORTANT THINGS SHOULD BE SAYS TWICE!'') Definitely recommended! But beware that it's kinda sensitive towards religions so if you're a religious person be aware.