starting to understand how people get addicted to something, LOL Nice novel author
This is just a disappointment, it started well, but turned into a children's story full of bad jokes in every chapter. The protagonist only grew in age because there is no maturity, the part that took me out of the story for good, was when he was attacked and his animal was almost killed, he doesn't do anything, he simply gets slapped by his annoying friend and forgets about everything that happened, WOW BIG STORY, next time at least try to kill his whole family then maybe he'll fight back lol -Google translator
You enter a fanfic to read something different but everything you read is even more normal than in the anime itself, fire magic destroyed my expectations, at most we will have some special fire later on, in my opinion nothing unique, just boring , so much cool power, light, time, space, new things, but no, choose fire. That's it for me. Continue this novel, since it is really rare for someone not to drop in 20cap, on the other hand, otherwise your story is really good. Good luck! Google translator
I love this novel, congratulations!! english is not my birth language, but can you tell me if he's gonna use salazar gift? The most powerful basilisk?
thanks for the chapter
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Eastern · Black_Lotus99
man i have an ideia, think about it as you want but, you see like the mc never stop to think about chaos, like chaos is in the name o his body art , i think he could use his mark to have a small preview of the chaos, nothing much like 0,1% or 1% about what chaos really is, and use it to create a new spear technique based on chaos, like he dont even has to be strong to use it, his moviments will be in something like a law but weak, if it is 1% of the understanding of chaos this technique will be that strong. yeeeaah maybe too op but it would be diferent from the usual joinig in a sect and learning a difficult technique. after all is just an idea, thanks for the chapter. 'English is not my first language'
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Eastern · Black_Lotus99
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
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