My review after reading till the 9th chapter though the author is newbie I can see he is trying his best to meet our expectations and the story is well built and the twists are very good. But it's still the beginning and I want to know what Dual Personality and unstable mind mean in his status.
Thanks for the chapter and how did he trick Mila?! I can't wait to find out!
I don't own this novel completely i read it and found that it has very great potential but the author wasted it by introducing useless cliches in between and turning the character development in the most stupid way possible. So i wanted to satisfy myself bt rewriting it into a better story i hope you guys can support me in this mission. And if the author is reading this i want to tell you that you are very good author and I apologise for stealing your work but i hope you can let me try making this work into a better piece that can be loved by everyone. Thank You ❣️
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original I Became A God In A Horror Game
After losing his job Bai Liu became involved with an unstoppable horror live streaming game full of various monsters and players with killer intent. Initially, everyone thought Bai Liu was just an ordinary person who strayed into the game. Later, they realized it was this game that welcomed its god with victory and a laurel crown saying, “Welcome home.”18 Chs 819 Collections
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Brave Soul Of Evil Supremacy
The protagonist is reborn in the world of the game he loved so much – [Dungeon Brave Souls]. However, he was reborn not as a hero who adventures with the heroine while flirting with her, but as a villain who steals the heroine and drives the world to extinction. Why in the world should he be reborn as a villain who ruined his favorite game? The protagonist is in despair, but he still decides to live his second life freely, using his knowledge of the game. However, the reality is not as good as he expected. Events that should not have happened in the game, scenario changes happen one after another…! The villainous character crushes both the demon king and the heroes. A heroic tale of evil supremacy!36 Chs 27 Collections
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Pure Love X Insult Complex
I fell in love. Her name was Shirasaka Yukino. I could only look at her from a distance. However one day I heard that she already had a boyfriend. Even if I love her, I can’t have her. The devil sent me an invitation. I can make her mine!2 Chs 3 Collections
I don't know about others but I see a good potential in the novel but the reviews are way overrated I am not saying that the novel is bad but come on it looks like the author has reviewed his own novel from different accounts. But I would like to read more and the quality of the chapters could be improved
Twisted Fate of Magic
Fantasy · WeirdWriter