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I admit, I didn't expect Doom Slayer... Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one :)

Will sakura look like on the cover later?

This novella is really cool, I can't wait :) But honestly, I prefer the original plot rather than this adventure in the world of Arifureta...

I was looking for a nice picture of Naruko and I found something like this :) Of course, this is the picture when she is older :D

In my opinion, MC is breeding too much, author, you are exaggerating with the number of these children...

I really like this series, but for me the blurring occurs too often... In my opinion, the child tinkers with it too much...

I showed this picture earlier, it's my favorite Siori :)

I would continue here...

I found this picture by accident. Adult Shiori ;D

Please continue writing this version, when you write it, think about the second version...

Nice manipulator... It would be nice to see Shiori as the last boss of the series, who is powerful and manipulates everyone... It wouldn't make the series worse because it is OP, in fact it would be more interesting... I don't like weak characters... So what if she's smart, she'll destroy you if you want to go somewhere and you have to carry meat with you in the form of bodyguards... So please don't make her weak, Mr. Author...

Certainly option 2, I hate it when the author humiliates his characters, it turns me off from all series, I almost gave up on this series for the last few chapters, Shiori can be OP why not, and Izumi can be her slave/servant...

Overall, this story has lost a lot in my eyes over the last few chapters, now I don't like it so much... I know that it is the author who shapes the stories, but I hate series in which the main character is bullied by the author when he at the beginning it creates him as someone great in the future... It's the worst thing you can do...

I think exactly the same, my friend...

You had to turn Izumi into a copy of Siori, I understand that this is caused by absorbing Shiori's energy, but in my opinion it's a bit distasteful... It's nice that Shiori regained access to chakra, but I still don't like the way it was done and the fact that you had to shame her like that... Now you're making her a victim instead of Saske, just to have an excuse to bring Tsunade to the village to heal her and become Hokage...