Interesting premise. I would have loved to have read more
It's not a good thing to attract deities attention, is it? You die in the very first test 😂😂 It'll be interesting to see the fight.
Aww, good to see you touch on these things. I brought it up in the last chapter, and I guess I should have waited to comment until reading this one. 😂 It'll be interesting to see the solution.
Yep, something was a little off with Ronaldo...
Ha, ha... becoming a little less human as the time wears on.... (Change your body give up your heart give up your soul... give up control to the voices in your head...I digress, lol) Now if there's a creepy ghost not like the others, I would say maybe try attacking the creepy ghost. I'll bet he's the one actually at fault. At first, I thought he wasn't like the universe cuz he hadn't been there as long. But as Link grew suspicious, I changed my mind. Quick call the Ghostbusters! 🤣
Is it the end for Link/Red? Will his soul rot there like all who've come before? Stay tuned! (Inventive plot line exclamation can't wait to see what he might think of to get out of this one!)
Creepy! Good job!
Interesting chapter! I can't wait to see or hear who's talking!; I also noticed that you called him Red - after so many chapters not using the name you might confuse readers. Small grammar error: weary : means tired. Wary means cautious. 🙂 Easy to confuse them.
With all of the description of what was being done to the poor young man, why would you blot out this word? It dilutes what the rescuer/friend is screaming right now. Rape. If you're going to describe it and use other profanity, then use the word.
Appetite! [BL]
Realistic · Phodoodles