Kellen_McNeil - Profile

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Hello, I know you’re gonna see this but I still want to get this out there. The reason why most people are mad in my opinion is that you left us on a proverbial cliffhanger with staffing. I think that these POV chapters are nice engaging and would have been even better if for example the main character ended up in a hospital in a coma afterwords and these alternate POV’s were the other characters reflecting on themselves. I think that would’ve been an interesting and engaging way to add additional world building to your story. Anyway, please don’t drop, thanks.

Thx for the chapter, looking foward towards more :)