FreddyDeathBear

FreddyDeathBear

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New author - Also a bear. \(°-°)/

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FreddyDeathBear
FreddyDeathBear
11 days ago
Replied to Young_fruit_Smiley

it's not... the previous one's were just less noticeable.

Fang Qing proactively informed Lin Yuan of this information, which was entirely a kind of investment. If she inquired about Lin Yuan's appearance after the fact, it would seem like she was using a favor to gain something in return.

Comprehension Ability: Creating and teaching the Dao in various worlds

Comprehension Ability: Creating and teaching the Dao in various worlds

Eastern · It's not Sunday

FreddyDeathBear
FreddyDeathBear
3 months ago
Replied to Poisonsectelder04_

every level up gives him 5 free stat points. he last assigned some at level 4, leaving himself with 10 points as "backup" and now he's reached level 9, which is an addition of 5 levels and 25 free stat points. so 10 + 25 is 35.

FreddyDeathBear
FreddyDeathBear
4 months ago
Commented

weren't fused people against the rules? since it was counted as 2 individuals that'd mean universe 7 is cheating by having 11 members instead, causing disqualification and ultimately leading to being erased.

FreddyDeathBear
FreddyDeathBear
4 months ago
Commented

8* universes. Not 12, since 4 were given abstinence.

FreddyDeathBear
FreddyDeathBear
4 months ago
Commented

I'm going to just leave this here... translation has gotten a little poor in the past 30 or so chapters...

FreddyDeathBear
FreddyDeathBear
4 months ago
Replied to FreddyDeathBear

oh and she also somehow knew that he had the ability to escape buus stomach, which... how would she know that? i really like the novel but maaaaan, is it a bit far fetched for some of these plots.

FreddyDeathBear
FreddyDeathBear
4 months ago
Commented

ok... but how, and also, this quickly? there is literally not a single chance, no matter how intelligent she is, for her to figure that out and make something that powerful to disrupt the LITERAL LAWS OF THE UNIVERSE, In that short of a timespan. this is literally the dumbest plot section of this novel by FAR. What is with the random bs super powered bad guys with op stuff that can't really be explained aside from "another universe, different events" just to force the character into dire circumstances. can't have the character become op because there'd be no challenge for him? then make one that actually makes sense. like for instance his power growth was too fast and the disturbance awakened beerus early and now he has to fight the literal god of destruction for the right to exist. even something like that would be a thousand times better than, random pink lady somehow survived the power of destruction because plot armor, then within a literal day or 2 creates a device capable of cutting off laws that literally make the universe work.

FreddyDeathBear
FreddyDeathBear
5 months ago
Commented

did he not require the metal of time again? or was that only to unlock the feature?

FreddyDeathBear
FreddyDeathBear
FreddyDeathBear
5 months ago
Commented

I'm so confused does the MC want the storyline to play out the same like he said or not? he's changed soooo much so far that there is no cell arc, no androids, no invasion of earth by the Saiyan's nor Frieza, which also means there's no reason to go to namek, which ALSO means there is no reason or step for him to achieve super Saiyan, there's also the fact that one of the main antagonist of the current era, the Red ribbon army no longer exists, then now he has parents that are interfering in his growth along with the main character, he's telling them things before they should have found out, and introducing higher technology into the society making it progress faster than it should. all of this combined and you're telling me he still wants to watch the events unfold before his eyes... riiiiiiight. If he doesn't actually care about the plot of the story, then don't make him constantly make choices about it and choose to "preserve the plot" if he's just going to change it anyways.

  • The Fallen Deity original

    The Fallen Deity

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE

    A war had broken out in the heavens and the mortal realm. The war in the heavens was quickly ended with the deaths of all but one Deity known as Alex. During the war in the heavens Alex was injured and found themself in the mortal realm. The only downside was that their power was nearly gone. Follow Alex on their journey through the mortal realm, eventually gaining their power, and deciding whether to ascend back to the heavens or to stay in the land of the mortals. (Everything in this novel is original. If found anywhere else it is advised to remove it due to copyright.) (P.S. might get a little gruesome at some points... not all mortals are kind.)

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