Its alright for your first attempt. Keep it up for I liked it. Just don't drop it. Be stable. I think you lack the ability to explain an event pretty clearly and in a stable way. But I think you can improve it after some period. I think that you don't make grammatical mistakes and your writing is alright.
Can you explain how the attack powers and stuffs are calculated?
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