Webnovel Author: Trickyreadz - Fanfic Collection

don't make him put that bussy in your face when he's got you in a grapple

Anyway this is gonna be spoilers and its bit off from me having not read this in a year or two vahn isn't a very growing character now don't get me wrong he does change in simpler ways and when it comes to how he handles certain issues and problems but that said he seemingly never grows to be as strong as he seems to need to be instead of just developing over time it's like he hits plateaus and doesn't overcome then for a hundred chapters at a time after he's gotten past a certain lvl and it becomes repetitive train fight upkeep harem make things find someone plotting or being evil he starts trouble and then refocusing on training then doing it all over again in a different order I know it's just life but he should be able to just try not to get into trouble after he's established himself and grow until he doesn't have to worry about that anymore also sex scenes with the the harem at like 20 people is ridiculously just not needed it doesn't ever focus on anyone and never has any tension or spice or build up for it to actually be kinda fun to read but ya know it was kinda enjoyable for while so maybe I actually liked it to a point but it just got boring when I can see ein is good at writing so why does it have to be so infuriating slow growth but rushed in the context of the story

wow is this good you just hit the nail on the head I'm super interested in how this is gonna work and I'm enjoying this massively cannot wait for more only reason you don't have 5 stars in update stability is that I don't know if you will drop this or not will change when completed or dropped

I really liked this alot hope to see you continue this story i see that you updated it last month but haven't post much more if you could give a update about the story that would be great

you still alive author we've been waiting hope to see at least a status update soon

it's not bad it might be because English isn't your first language or perhaps you not being a more experienced writer but your explaining as the characters and normal people don't and it's usually concise if it is and the characters at some points don't feel like they have a personality and I feel like you can really tell when it comes to Emmet but it might be because I've seen him written as well if not better than how his movie counter part played him sides all that it's not bad