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Yo author you are doing well keep up the good work

Dude can you come and continue this novel Please

Bro author this is a prime transformers novel bro keep it up and hope u can continue posting 🙏 🙏 🙏 🙏

Giving this writing gig a thing throw all ur critics thank u

I am still the first to comment As I have said before the first chapter was beautifully done, We hope for frequent update and a well rounded story line

Nice Story Author, I like the idea ,and this is the kind of story I enjoy. But there is one problem I want to point out, which is the mc being too dumb for my liking, as someone who was from earth with all those wild Ideas from anime's, he could've handled that situation better with that squid monster 👾, like using his system to scout ahead because he said" he won't let any one die" or making his avatar stronger if he can creat a squid monster with basically (absorption/adaptive evolution) he can definitely make an avatar stronger or how he is always to late to react, that sh*t annoys me to no end, like isn't he outside the universe can he just pause the world 🌏 and save said person. Anyways, Sorry for the rant but that's my little observation, wel-done again author you are doing great so far.