First off, they’re 16. So being super experienced at that age is pretty disappointing. Second, and more importantly, it’s a preference, it might not matter to you, but that doesn’t mean it can’t matter to others
Last but not least… Alicia actually liked Rey.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter
There’s multiple rounds in each game, they just finished round one
[Next apocalypse game will start in 24 hours, prepare yourself accordingly]
Re: Apocalypse Game
Games · Avan
The cloak gave him a +1 sneak skill, artificially boosting it from basic to novice. Now that he actually upgraded sneak to novice, the cloak will artificially boost it to expert
[You gained proficiency in [Sneak] - Basic to Novice]
Re: Apocalypse Game
Games · Avan
I’ve been thinking about this for a while, but while Lux and Cai don’t have the recording devices and can’t be seen by everyone else, isn’t Keoza still able to watch everything? We’ve seen multiple times already that Keoza can read Lux’s mind and respond to his thoughts, as well as see everything he’s doing. Doesn’t that mean that Keoza has been watching Lux every time he does it with Iris and as of recently Cai?
Not sure about the exact details, but it was during Dyons trial when he was visiting the I think dragon king, who was his friend. During the visit, it was revealed that Luna and the dragon dudes wife had been messing around for a while. And Luna also ended up doing it with her again to try and steal something, though it didn’t work because Dyon and the dragon guy watched it happen.
Of course, they were seeing their Mistress with rose tinted glasses. It would be more accurate to say that Luna stole Dyon's innocence rather than the other way around. After all, technically speaking, Luna lost her virginity to a woman, not Dyon. If anything, she was the impure one in their relationship.
Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God
Action · Awespec
I seriously don’t understand how you are keeping track of these points anymore. In the beginning, you said he gained 5 per level, yet the first like 10 levels after he killed the miasma devil he didn’t gain any and was like 30 points behind. Then at some point you started giving him only one per level. And pretty recently when he had 33 points and put 30 into strength, he ended up with only 1 after he leveled up, making him a couple more points behind. Then a few chapters later he magically had 34. Like I mentioned a while ago, I can understand it being hard to keep track of all the different stats, but stupid mistakes like these shouldn’t be happening at all, definitely not as often as they are happening.
Free attribute points: 39.
God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
Fantasy · Demons_and_I
It’s 100, not 50. 500 divided by 5 is 100. This is another mistake that doesn’t make sense as it is simple math.
Not only did the spell not have any cooldown, but he was also able to create a total of 50 every second, with each one of them not having any mana cost requirements.
God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
Fantasy · Demons_and_I
Really author? I can understand It being hard to keep track of all the stats, but this many mistakes so early on? He has had 10 free attribute points since before he killed the miasma devil, not to mention the special mutant bear, and now he only has 20? He leveled up like 7 times and you gave him only 2 levels worth of free attribute points. Unless you forgot to mention something that would explain it, this is just bad writing at this point. Not to mention all the other mistakes, like how the first few times he showed his stats after being saved by Evangeline, he still had no stamina and super low HP, only for you to make his stamina almost full right after he gets out of a fight. And based on a mistake early on where you said he reached level 5, then showed him at level 4, he's missing a level. And if I went back and checked I could list so many more stupid mistakes you have made that shouldn't have been made in the first place, including the ones listed above. And while as of now I'm still going to read this as the story itself is interesting, the constant stupid mistakes you are making with the stats is really starting to annoy me and others.
The mutant beast had an agility value of 300, while he was formerly 91+(30). Under the effects of {Golden Blood}, his agility stats will transform into 182+(30). This is because the effects of {Golden Blood} only affected his base stats. It couldn't influence the stats of an external item he made use of. With the addition of the free attribute points, his base stats transformed into 111+(30) when normal, and 222+(30) when using {Golden Blood}.
God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
Fantasy · Demons_and_I
A chapter or two ago you said he already reached level five. You made an error when you put him as level four in this chapter. So the original comment was correct
Except it’s already been proven that that’s not the case with Belle
Sylvia was very ugly, and her body lacked the right proportions that made a woman incredibly attractive to men.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter