Why is the text here weird?
Suddenly, the Orc did something unexpected. It slammed its fist into the ground, and the earth rumbled with a deep tremor. The serpent, caught off guard, loosened its grip slightly.
Fantasy · PlotTwistingPanda
Do you mean heterochromia?
Sooner than I realized I was at the age of five, the time drew closer. I finally started to see my features. I have blonde hair like my mom but it's shaped like my father's, while I have my father's eye color I have my mother's eyes. Am like a combination of both. Well, I should be cause am their kid.
Fantasy · Ilovepsicyahi
Dude this is ridiculous.
In just a quarter of an hour, Lin Bai managed to scan through all the memories of Lin Xuanqing's entire life, crystal clear!
Eastern · The Sole Sword Emperor
Intimidating not intimating
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Action · Avid_Writer
Cat not car
"Why do you ask? Could it be that you have a car or a fox? Actually, both are fine. I don't hate them."
Eastern · A Little Immortal
How does he have access to the internet, that doesn’t make sense.
'Then, let's start with this one.' Choosing the potion that I wanted to go with, I ordered the ingredients on the internet. 'At least they are not that expensive.' I thought.
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
Story is moving really fast pace. Some explanation on the time skips.
ch 0 5 The Accident and the Final Test
Action · The_ALmighty2o
My bad I didn’ see you already did it.t
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Fantasy · Peterson_89
Can you make an aux chapter with that info and other information through the story.
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Fantasy · Peterson_89
Asher????
Suddenly, the sound of footsteps echoed through the store, and Asher whirled around, his heart in his throat. A ragged-looking man stood in the doorway, his eyes gleaming with a savage hunger.
Fantasy · ExpiredRice
Didn’t he say earlier that he picked a non-death match?
ch 41 First Match
Fantasy · Ken_da_writer
Author that doesn’t make sense. It would be better to say that because of the experience he gained so far he got better at dodging.
Lu Yuan heaved a sigh of relief. Luckily, he had practiced a movement art.
Eastern · Blue Sky Washing Rain
What question, that dialogue is missing.
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Fantasy · BishopsNemesis
What? This entire chapter needs to be refined. I love the story and appreciate the chapter but this is dfficult to understand at times.
Lu Ye changed his mind and realized that the other party was afraid that he was mistaken for him. The hand on the handle of the knife was loosened, and he said lightly: "I was killed."
Eastern · MoonlightUnivers
Is this first or third person?
I had some hints but I couldn't figure it out right now, so I focused back on the fight.
RISE OF THE FALLEN
Fantasy · Spandex_Playz