Exactly
"So, when are we starting?" Kitsuna said, crossing her own legs looking at big brother.
Fantasy · TheRealSkollie
Why did you use the "Joe ARE restaurant" and then use the "as long as OUR business." is it just a typo?
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Fantasy · Masquerade1010
wait, so Joe's mama is Mr.Ming?
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Fantasy · Masquerade1010
Bruh, that's what you got out of it?
Alice inspected the blade. "Yes, I guess your right." 'Kill All, no rename it.'
Fantasy · RestlessShadow
I really liked this book. The writing style was easy to follow, but the story kind of hopped around. I would say that this story was a little bit "messy" and took off in a direction I didn't expect. However, I still enjoyed it overall. The hardest part about this story was that I had to let go of so many interesting characters but that is part of the message. (I think? IDK)
bruh
"So how does it feel being slapped through the face by a dismembered arm, Hugo Boei?" I ask, dodging his hand grabs and taking the openings to slap him again.
Fantasy · TheRealSkollie
makes sense
'It's actually not.' Multiple people thought, looking at Kayda.
Fantasy · TheRealSkollie
I thought this story was kinda interesting. The writing style is very informal, and the speech sometimes needs to be read over and sounded out. The sporadic amounts of time between updates is a bummer, but I'm not totally invested in this story and can stand the wait. Overall, liked it.
Totally understand the struggle. I broke my arm this year and let's just say that English tests with time limits kinda suck when you only have one hand.
Demon Fox System
Fantasy · ShadowPhoenix_9