Webnovel Author: SecondVoidlord - Fanfic Collection

I would suggest you use Grammarly to check the English version for mistakes. Also try to make the chapter at least one thousand words, also you need to explain the motive of why your character want to be strong. why does he want to become strong, did something happen in his past that want to make him stronger so no one can step on him. Finally most authors tend to confuse the characters end goal with a motive behind their actions.

If you improve your grammar, more people will move past chapter one. I would recommend that you look at other well-written stories to get an idea of what you should be doing. Also, you need to focus on how to describe your character's actions and thoughts better. Next, you should start reading Wattpad stories to understand what terrible quality fanfiction is. Finally, If your fanfiction looks like something from Wattpad, your going to need to improve your grammar.(You also need to make your chapters longer)

If you improve your grammar, more people will move past chapter one. I would recommend that you look at other well-written stories to get an idea of what you should be doing. Also, you need to focus on how to describe your character's actions and thoughts better. Next, you should start reading Wattpad stories to understand what terrible quality fanfiction is. Finally, If your fanfiction looks like something from Wattpad, your going to need to improve your grammar.(A general guide that I wrote so you can improve your writing)(Also avoid reusing canon to start your story)

Their is no need to tell us the readers the starting events of Mha again, everyone knows what a superpower is. That just a waste of chapter one and the second chapter it just them finding out he quirk less like in canon