heather_gindroz

heather_gindroz

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heather_gindroz
heather_gindroz
3 years ago
Posted

overall this story is very good the writing quality is good as well as the story development of it and the character's personality and how it develops is really good as well the updating is good but I wish it was a little faster or more chapter's at a time but that's just me wishing to read it more and I also like the world background overall this is a fantastic story that I hope you will keep writing in the future 😁👍

heather_gindroz
heather_gindroz
3 years ago
Commented

among us 😏

"There's… something I want to tell you… I think… there's an impostor among us…" said Athena.

Epic of Caterpillar

Epic of Caterpillar

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

heather_gindroz
heather_gindroz
3 years ago
Commented

man this chapter made me soo guuu

She is really a crybaby guu…

Epic of Caterpillar

Epic of Caterpillar

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

heather_gindroz
heather_gindroz
3 years ago
Commented

name I forget to add that

"No! S-Sorry, good lady!" said Smirkes.

Epic of Caterpillar

Epic of Caterpillar

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

heather_gindroz
heather_gindroz
3 years ago
Commented

when I see his I always think he's smirking

"No! S-Sorry, good lady!" said Smirkes.

Epic of Caterpillar

Epic of Caterpillar

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

heather_gindroz
heather_gindroz
3 years ago
Commented

she's so lucky but anyone remember when she just had -2 luck I think

heather_gindroz
heather_gindroz
3 years ago
Posted

this book is really incredible it has me hooked onto it this book for me has very good writing story writing this book is overall an incredible book 10/10

heather_gindroz
heather_gindroz
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

heather_gindroz
heather_gindroz
3 years ago
Posted

This book is incredibly good it has me hooked overall everything is great from the characters to the story the writing all of it is incredible 10/10 book overall.