TheMadHippo

TheMadHippo

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TheMadHippo
TheMadHippo
1 months ago
Replied to StarGazerr

But in seriousness, sorry for info dumping. I will try to make the story more showing and not telling.

TheMadHippo
TheMadHippo
1 months ago
Replied to StarGazerr

That’s the whole point of teaching

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TheMadHippo
TheMadHippo
1 months ago
Replied to Sir_Stronghold

True, I agree it's a dumb limitation, but honestly it was my first time writing and I just wrote whatever was in my head. I was stuck on wanting it to be fast pace so that the mc will be OP or a slow pace where it will take a while for the mc to reap the rewards. Sorry for not executing it well.

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[System Message: To demonstrate techniques to students, simply focus your thoughts on the desired ability. While teaching, the host can temporarily use demonstration power.]

One Piece: Sensei System

One Piece: Sensei System

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TheMadHippo
TheMadHippo
1 months ago
Replied to Kamikaze_Eagle

Hey Kamikaze_Eagle, I appreciate you for your honesty, and to be honest I kinda agree with you. There were plans in the future that will allow the MC to gain all of the skills he had been taught when the students reaches 100% loyalty, but I didn't execute them well as I was stuck between wanting it to be fast pace or slow burn, so I apologise for that. I admit that I overused the agriculture part so from now on I will keep them to a minimum. Most of all, thank you for reading the story even if it's not for you.

TheMadHippo
TheMadHippo
1 months ago
Replied to Miz0r3

I understand it now thank you for clarifying man, just I can’t really make this accurate to the power scale of DB just because it would be completely out of reach, also he would need more SP to buy external techniques. Even with Ki, if there’s no external techniques it would be as useless, so I hope this justifies my choice. But overall, thank you for letting me know, I’ll try to fix the power scaling if you don’t like it. 😁

TheMadHippo
TheMadHippo
1 months ago
Replied to ZackDKaizo

I absolutely get it, I’ll try to tone it down but still staying true to his character. Appreciate your feedback!

"The Great Captain Usopp agrees that proper training requires careful pacing," Usopp quickly backed toward the edge of the training area. "Perhaps we can continue another time, after I've prepared more special ammunition..."

One Piece: Sensei System

One Piece: Sensei System

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TheMadHippo
TheMadHippo
1 months ago
Replied to bearburrable

True, I did miss on explaining it well, but basically he cannot use them even if he taught it himself, that’s the limitation.

[System Message: To demonstrate techniques to students, simply focus your thoughts on the desired ability. While teaching, the host can temporarily use demonstration power.]

One Piece: Sensei System

One Piece: Sensei System

Anime & Comics · TheMadHippo

TheMadHippo
TheMadHippo
1 months ago
Replied to Miz0r3

Well could Yamcha destroy a planet? not really. He still has ki but he isn’t planetary level.

TheMadHippo
TheMadHippo
1 months ago
Replied to nunya_business_3493

He just loves teaching and seeing growth. There isn’t much motivation but the system is his motivation. The more he teaches the stronger he’s gonna get to protect himself in this world.

[The host can use Sensei Points to teach techniques. Any treasure or currency found in this world can be converted to Sensei Points at a rate of 100 units for 0.1 Sensei Points. The more valuable the treasure, the more points it will provide. Additionally, when students reach certain loyalty levels, the host will receive Sensei Points as rewards. The more potential a student has, the greater these rewards will be. When a student reaches 100% loyalty, the host will receive a complete rebate of all points spent on that student, plus additional points based on any abilities the student already possessed.]

One Piece: Sensei System

One Piece: Sensei System

Anime & Comics · TheMadHippo

TheMadHippo
TheMadHippo
1 months ago
Replied to ZackDKaizo

You're right, I was so focused on the story, I just didn’t think about it. Thanks for pointing that out man, I’ll fix it asap. Big ups ZackDKaizo for helping me improve the quality.

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    One Piece: Sensei System

    Anime & Comics ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION SLICEOFLIFE ONEPIECE

    When a teacher Lucius Matthews dies in a grain silo accident, he expects eternal darkness. Instead, he wakes up on a mysterious island with a supernatural teaching system that lets him demonstrate but not use incredible martial arts techniques. His first students? A rubber-bodied pirate captain, a money-loving navigator, a compulsive liar, a mysterious princess, and her oversized combat duck. Welcome to the strangest classroom in any world, where the new teacher just needs to stay alive long enough to give his first lesson. ------ Author Note: I loved NunuXD "Marvel: Game Maker System" and give him full credit for the first chapter. Disclaimer: I do not own any characters or the world created by Oda Sensei and most of the story will stray away from the cannon but I will try my best to keep you guys interested.

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