First off, the characters are disappointingly cliche. There's no creativity outside of MC being super old. Second, he went to sleep in 1945, slept for 50 years which would mean it's 1995. How TF did MC almost buy an iPhone(2007), uses Google(1998), and downloads Whatsapp(2009)? HOW? Author and all future readers, do like me and drop this story.
Since when did grief cause asthma? Stress-induced asthma, sure but, stress-caused asthma. That's a little too fictitious, no?
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BLOOD MUTANT SYSTEM.
Fantasy · joshua_jt3
VIVE LA RESISTANCE!!✊🏿
"I know, I know," the mayor said. "I will do my best to find ones that actually deserve to be here. Please, just give me 3 more months. I promise you, you will immediately start seeing the changes."
Strongest Nova: Path of Vengeance
Fantasy · Snoring_Panda
Is this bitch high? What has she been smoking?
"I love you, Vincent." She kissed him, and he tasted the metallic tang of blood on her lips. He was surprised to find that he enjoyed the taste, so he kissed her back with a newfound intensity.
Lunar Supremacy: Moonlight Overlord
Urban · MZAF
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Murim: Struggle of the Weak
Eastern · Adamo_Amet
Tradition is survival, time-tested survival. The pursuit of the unknown is dangerous. Your words are those of a person responsible only for their own well-being.
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Murim: Struggle of the Weak
Eastern · Adamo_Amet
No no no, you're saying it wrong. It's not fiance. It's EX fiancé.
"You..." Adelina's face turned red as she felt humiliated upon getting called out by her fiance.
Chaos Warlord: Reincarnated in Eldrich with the Devil System!
Fantasy · DurcalAka
In his previous life, he had spent most of the first ten years of his life submerged in darkness. During that time, he had learned to breathe it, to embrace it, to become one with it. As a result, he ended up developing a special technique that allowed him to picture what was around him by relying solely on the echoes of his surroundings.
Chaos Warlord: Reincarnated in Eldrich with the Devil System!
Fantasy · DurcalAka
Within the first 20 chapters, MC has literally gone against everything his background would suggest. Author has thrown character growth out of the window and basically written a new character. Author promised steak but served burgers. It's good, but the flavor is wrong.
How are you going to blame this kid's body cus you don't know how to swim? Changing bodies doesn't change the physics of swimming itself. If you were capable of swimming before, a younger body that you've shown full control over would not stop you from applying the mechanics needed to swim. Either you can't swim out or you can't swim, period.
He paddled his hands and legs, attempting to mimic the swimming movements he had observed in his previous life, only to be reminded of a bitter truth: he inhabited the body of a fifteen-year-old child.
I Can Copy Curses
Fantasy · ShinGotLost