Bibbylon

male LV 11
2021-02-23 Joint Global
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Bibbylon
Bibbylon
2 years ago
Commented

Bro ultimate class and Satan class are totally different level so I suggest you correct this chapter.

Bibbylon
Bibbylon
2 years ago
Posted

Read 4 chapter then dropped it. Just to sum it up the man character is an Uchiha and yet despite knowing and see Itachi kill his friends and family but still tries to get him back on Uchiha side. Like who the duk does that? I get that the original writer is probably an Itachi simp or something but just think logically if you see someone is going around kill everyone you know including your sister how could you even think of having that person by your side. Not only that even after convincing Itachi to give up you can still see Itachi cares more on the villages side then his own family and clan. To make worst the MC still wants to stay in Konoha even though the just tried to kill his entire clan. Just idiotic really.

Bibbylon
Bibbylon
2 years ago
Posted

It say it’s a reincarnation but he literally knows nothing about naruto so pretty much a OC. Seriously naming the MC Luke in a clan full of Japanese name makes no sense😂😂 The MC has no real character just your average fanfic personality. Overall it just a typical plain fic and that doesn’t even fit in with the world background.

Bibbylon
Bibbylon
2 years ago
Commented

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Bibbylon
2 years ago
Posted

Fantastic!! Good read with a different perspective on DXD. Great world building and character developments. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Bibbylon
Bibbylon
Bibbylon
2 years ago
Posted

Such and amazing fanfic. The ideas are new and interesting, writing is good, just which there was more chapters. 👍👍👍👍👍👍

Bibbylon
Bibbylon
3 years ago
Posted

Love the fanfic. It not often you see a good or consistent fanfic of Spartacus but this fanfic absolutely nails it. Definitely one of my fanfic out right now, one definitely recommend everyone to give it a read. Alway looking forward to the next chapter and hopes the author can post more as I can’t wait for the next chapter.🤩🤩

Bibbylon
Bibbylon
Bibbylon
3 years ago
Commented

That break up was the driest reason I’ve ever heard in fanfic, at least make it lead to something like build the mc character to make it have tension in village to build plot or have so he leaves the village for awhile goes on adventure meet new people and start his own village.