* catch a few of them muttering under their breaths (?) Instead of “a few of the”
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Fantasy · Guiltythree
* was the cause of why Or * was the reason why
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* in the case of a Citadel
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* A perfect replica of the nameless temple
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* not only did the strain on Sunny lessen significantly
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* he had felt something familiar (?)
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Fantasy · Guiltythree
Double checking…. “And become one” suggests Sunny himself will become one with the Dream Realm. Is this accurate? If I read it “and became one” then it’s talking about Earth and not Sunny becoming part of the Dream Realm.
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Fantasy · Guiltythree
* his heart was cold (As suggested by Vince51) Not sure what Sunny’s “heat” is 🤔
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Fantasy · Guiltythree
This is another instance where Guilty makes the ancient people feel a lot closer to home… It’s the small things about humanity... The little parallels… that seem especially poignant… 🥺
However, there were no corpses. No bones, no signs of a vicious battle. Nobody would know what had happened here, and at best, they would feel idle curiosity about the fate of the missing inhabitants.
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Fantasy · Guiltythree
I forgot they were going to knight him 😆
"Indeed. Please kneel."
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Fantasy · Guiltythree