Koman_

Koman_

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Koman_
6 months ago
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Tftc

Koman_
Koman_
6 months ago
Replied to DraxTheWriter

Well, no? [img=thinking]

Koman_
Koman_
6 months ago
Replied to Spartan_001

On the one hand, you're right, but if you read further, you'll learn that zombies may not be so "ordinary". Maybe giving them more meaning will diversify what I write more.

"I wonder if zombies are stronger at night than during the day" - I'll find out in a few hours. I hope the time of day doesn't affect the zombies. If they were stronger at night, I'd have to plan my future differently. I'd definitely need to build a secure place where zombies can't get in.

What to do in apocalypse with System?

What to do in apocalypse with System?

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Koman_
Koman_
6 months ago
Replied to S22

Por eso les pregunto qué preferirían ustedes como lectores. Sinceramente, antes del capítulo 8 estaba un poco preocupado por cómo serían los diálogos, pero lo he leído varias veces y creo que no es muy artificial. Si quieres y puedes, da tu opinión si es agradable de leer o qué aspectos de la redacción hay que mejorar.

Koman_
Koman_
6 months ago
Replied to ErozothDraeor

Hey, thanks for your feedback. As for the tags, I plan to add them once their elements actually appear in the story because I don’t want anyone to come expecting a romance that isn’t there yet. Regarding the development of the book, I do plan to focus mainly on that. Since this is my first book, I want to start by creating characters with strong personalities and a more "realistic world" so that the reader can immerse themselves in it, even if it slightly neglects this the plot.

Koman_
Koman_
6 months ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter

Koman_
Koman_
6 months ago
Posted

Very good novel all is amazing. Mc is Simple, everything is perfectly explained. The idea of the novel itself is awesome. But is one mistake. This novel is dropped.

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