you need to give your subordinates some more resources otherwise they will be too weak to make any difference . Mc needs to be little more open minded and not think about betrayal all the time. You are writting him more and more like leylin. Anyways, hope you keep writting. 👍
ye Ziyun is also quite pitiful, you should have mc take her too.
hmm
Yang Xin entered inside, her dress revealing her smooth body, her figure was hot, twin peaks proudly standing, she had the mature attractive aura around her.
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Anime & Comics · Keetarp
just call him young man, teen doesn't really fits the setting.
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TALES OF DEMON AND GODS : FAN FICTION
Anime & Comics · Keetarp
lol
[Beep! An abnormal activities observed within Host. Blood flow increased by almost 45%, activity of the blood essence significantly increased! Countermeasures protocol activated! Releasing Tranquility potion into the bloodstream!]
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Anime & Comics · Keetarp
nobody is crying about it except for you.
I still lacked talent.
A Regressor'S Tale of Cultivation
Others · NeverluckySMILE
As I said before, chill tf out. You obviously don't have enough brain power to understand what I am talking about. Comprehension levels are in negative.
Over the past ten years, Kim Young-hoon practiced martial arts, and I studied medicine.
A Regressor'S Tale of Cultivation
Others · NeverluckySMILE
are you actually retarded? This is an example, author can write whatever tf he wants.
I still lacked talent.
A Regressor'S Tale of Cultivation
Others · NeverluckySMILE
keep it up bro.👍
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original Easy Mode in Martial World
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Reborn In Cultivation World (Ancient Strengthening Technique)
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Fei Chen, an ordinary corporate worker finds himself reborn in a world of cultivation called Kyushu. Follow his journey in a mystical world where martial arts reign supreme. ------------------------------------------------------------------- This is my first time writing anything. The world is of Ancient Strengthening Technique. The cover image is not mine, if the owner wants it to be removed please comment in the reviews. Thank You for reading. :)21 Chs 1.2k Collections
good chapter
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