Time_Zekrom_4361

Time_Zekrom_4361

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Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361
1 years ago
Commented

Author you good?

Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361
1 years ago
Commented

Good story so far!! I want to ask if you could somehow give more personality to the main character since the story so far is just a sequence of events, which is fine since the story barely started. Good luck!!

Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361
2 years ago
Commented

I dont like how you try to make Xiao Yan have almost the same as the mc just because of dragon bloodline. Like how strong is a dragon and why is Xiao Yan so weak.

Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361
2 years ago
Commented

I shall predict the future, he shall make Xiao Chen look like he cheated!!!

Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361
2 years ago
Commented

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After all, before reincarnating, he had studied until he got a master's degree. High school exam questions would be very easy for him.

Reincarnated as a second generation villain

Reincarnated as a second generation villain

Eastern · abinn

Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361
2 years ago
Commented

Great story telling, background, and transition!!! Keep it up!!

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Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter!!

Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361
2 years ago
Posted

This novel is great so far but I feel sad for you now after web novel banned everyone from reading on PC which makes it even harder for people to find ur story. I will try to read this novel in my free time on myiPhone. Goodluck!!

Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361
2 years ago
Commented

thank you for the chapter!!! Hope this gives u some motivation!!!

Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361
2 years ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter!!! when is the mc going to steal the "special items encounters"