Floridaboytonio

The stand off part between the MC and his grandfather, slightly cringe

Last part was cringe

Last 3 chapters have been kinda repetitive

Why are you prolonging this for no reason

Whoever said the quality of the story would drop because of the satanic ritual crap was a liar. Story still entertaining and high quality. Keep up the good work bro

Nice, crazy how I was thinking about when the mixtape would drop at the beginning of the chapter, and then my question was answered 10 seconds later lol

I think it will fuck up the story if all of them get pregnant and stop being ninjas at 12 years old. There’s no need, after they turn 20 females in naruto usually marry and stop be ninjas to take care of the kids. If you’re worried about the females getting hurt on missions then give him a dual cultivation art so the women can become stronger. If this is just smut with no plot then ignore what I’m saying, but I feel like good plot with smut will always be better

Great job, I Feel like this song could be like Youngboy’s ‘Lonely Child’ but his version. Would have liked to see the song rating in the end before we switched to Kenny

I think last chapter was the wrong one or am I trippin

Tftc brother