Shizuha1

4 days ago

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the end where it says "you didn't read." is that referring to us as readers in a reader style stories or.is.it meant to be *they didn't read." as in the main character didn't read them.

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Shizuha1

4 days ago

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caught *their* attention.

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Shizuha1

4 days ago

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*they* simply decided

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4 days ago

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harmful to *their* body

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4 days ago

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something to entertain themselves* with

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Shizuha1

4 days ago

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take *their* mind off things

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Shizuha1

4 days ago

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the fist part which refers to the previous paragraph that refers to vash and knives. "They also have to deform one of *their* arms to achieve such a feat,"