There is an error on Izanagi here. The technique needs to be active first before you can rewrite any other reality that follows. If the Izanagi technique is inactive and you take damage, the damage stays even if you activate Izanagi afterwards.
Good writing quality and world background. The characters however, would need a bit more diversity. They all seem to be the egoistic types. The mc though is a villain and a psychopath that deserves no sympathy. Not an antihero. He totally deserves what he got in the first few chapters - getting ditched and fed to the dogs. Also, he is much more pathetic and petty than these so called young masters that does not care a bit about the support classes.
Mad oo!!. IDAN no dey carry last!Looking forward to a great story!
Lol. Honestly no offense here and please don't make it sound like it's spiritual or something, cuz you Yoruba people heh!. Just checked your name and I can see we are from the same tribe. I already noticed you are Nigeria with the "Oga" I saw yesterday. Anyway I was just making some comments and same with you and we are all just having fun. So I hope you have a good night 👍
And what exactly do you mean by "Una dey think first oo (no offense)" state clearly whatever you want to say.
I do not want to have this conversation if you act like you nvr read the novel. I asked you what he did to get so much power exactly in my last comment so why are you asking me ? And if i might add, this is a novel with a "system tag" and even if the Author nvr stated it to be so obvious the abilities he got is more than overpowered, every single one of them, not just the three he got from G.O.D, even those he got from Kravel. In fact every one of the six runes he got from Kravel is better than some stated divine abilities.
If some part of the novel gives you thrills and makes you continue to read, good for you. But to say I'm biased because I stated the obvious, that means you are biased. I NVR said the novel was a bad one and people could love what they read for several reasons, I just mentioned some inconsistencies where things looks shady.
If a novel has this many inconsistency in less than 20 chapters, what do you think will happen in 100 ? And you expect me to read more ? No hard feelings ? Funny right. Anyone who reads a lot of novels would know the signs of a bad novel or a passionate writer/Author who puts low effort into their books in the first few chapters. Why would anyone read more just to feel like they have wasted their time at later chapters or hope to "unread" the novel if possible.
(Ogbení) if you read the novel you would know why it's ridiculous to say he got strong thru hard work. which hard work pls ?
I totally agree. It is just damn annoying. The argument here is not sound as mentioned in the chapter, if Guiz city is that strong and powerful that the city did not even have to move its own military. Its too dumb to even think about, given how strong the military of a system city is. Not to mention its a weak steward that can be easily assassinated.
Genetic Ascension
Fantasy · Awespec