DarkRayne

story is still in its beginning and mainly only world building and some progress has happened up to now but still it is interesting and has potential. Author keep up the good work 👍.

This story is quite a masterpiece world building is well done, characters personality is well written and story development is good. If there is one problem that author always tries to keep a comedic undertone which is fine but if it used consistently in nearly all chapters it is a little weird.

Overall quite a good plot but sometimes it is like a skip in event such as Mc tried to see past of Ember but failed and directly it goes to next event.Overall it is quite a good story.

Quite a good story with nice plot development with a thrilling writing style.Still quite a time has passed with Author updating regularly.