Webnovel Author: Toruu - Fanfic&Novel Collection

I read until the last chapter only to realize that this story is not for me. The author is trying to develop a drama between a protagonist who would theoretically have to be a mature adult, but who manages to be worse than Ino, Sakura and Hinata in terms of maturity, putting himself in situations as a slave to the Hyuuga and just accepting that things happen. in front of him. In his past life he was abandoned and ignored by Ino and Sakura because he had become weak and talentless (he himself said that only Hinata still treated him well, but because he didn't have the courage to do anything he just let her go to the Naruto's arms), but in this life he accepts Ino and Sakura even though he knows that they are only interested in him because he shows that he has talent... idk, it seems like he completely forgot his two past lives and just became a child who thinks like a child again.

OK, let's go. The protagonist... I liked that he has a backstory and that he is having personality development, as reading about some protagonists that have appeared recently was tiring me a little. His family... so far I'm enjoying his interaction with his family, I think it could improve in some parts, mainly to show him developing more with his mother, since so far the contact with her hasn't been that much, but with his siblings and father are great. Is the system... an OP system? Yes, but less than I thought it would be. From what I read in the synopsis, I thought he would really become the best singer in the world in a few days, but the development is much more realistic, which is much better, since if it were like the synopsis I don't know if I would be able to read it. . I'm seeing your clickbait Nunu! Update stability... so far it's ok, the chapters are long, from what I've seen it already has some advanced chapters, so I don't have much to comment on that. The background of the world... so far is being explained slowly, there is still a lot that hasn't been shown, so I won't say whether it's good or bad, but what has been shown so far is very consistent. Overall, a 4.8/5, keep posting and I'll keep reading :)

poor him lol

Yes :3

Nop :)

I will not put anything with flirtations, maybe on the part of other people liking him, but not him. Only when he's older. There will be no harem.

Thanks!

OK <3 [img=recommend]

Do not exist

Not for the next few chapters!

I literally wrote in the synopsis that this would be an alternate reality where I would change information about the wizarding world. I advised that if you weren't willing to open your mind, then don't read the fanfic. If you haven't read this, I can't help it.

No

My plan was to develop some of Ron's stats and put the System in when he enters Hogwarts, but I think I'll put them in earlier so I don't get too carried away. If you have another suggestion, you can tell me too :)

Not my current goal, but maybe further down the line c:

Toru's 5-star rating I'm excited about the story I'm creating, so expect many more chapters. This soap opera has an editor reviewing each chapter, so I'm confident with her performance. Hope you like it :)

Ok :)

hard to please everyone