SolomonCliff

So, as the author here are a few thoughts on the story. It's a simple story, where we, as the audience, follow the lives of the two main characters, Vellichor and Sonder, with many interruptions and small type of events, instead of big story arcs and high stakes. It's adventure and slice of life, so manage your expectation.

Nah, there ain't gonna be a harem. And I put the no-harem tag on the book. There is going to be a little bit of romance, but not enough for me to genuinly put on the romance tag.

I'm feeling pretty flattered but no thank you. I want neither Asher the Insane nor Book of Kings to be contracted. There is no specific reason for this.

No, I haven't been contracted with Webnovel.

What's good, people? As you can tell by my name, I'm the author. 👋 (Hi, there) I'm here to tell you that this book is complete garbage. I had an idea for an isekai story once and didn't know where to go with it but still wrote 100 chapters, (with exactly 100k words). So, enjoy the dumbester fire of unconcentrated, foggy, hazy and also lazy writing that I have produced.

Honestly, I don't like this. The singular thing which makes this book not work for me at all, is the premise that the MC, One, or Long, is supposedly, "Beyond Almighty". But for some, god forsaken reason, he plays with such absolute trivial matters, like being reborn as a human to change humanity. If he is "Beyond Almighty" then he could do anything in an instant, and with the fact that he is, nothing in the story will be of any matter of consequence. If something happens he doesn't like, he could just change it to something he does. If the "Beyond Almighty" being doesn't use his power then it's just bad writing for the sake that plot goes on, which is just running with a very, very flawed premise. If he had lost his memory, or part of power is locked away when being reborn then this book would just work outright better. Also, ew with all the lewd stuff. Not that I am against it but this book is so unbelievable disgusting with it. Why would a "Beyond Almighty" being even be interested in a harem, or even sex in general?

I can't say that I found this very captivating. It's only the first chapter, but it is still chock-full of exposition to explain the coming story-line and the relation the MC, Alexander, shares with his surroundings. Which is the cursed, "Hated by All," cliché, even for no good reason except not being very good at, what exactly, "fighting and magic?" as a 14-year-old. I personally don't enjoy that sort of thing, "show, don't tell." and the like. The grammar and prose is the saving grace, being of higher quality one usually finds when reading new novels on this site.