The grammar is horrible, there are sites that can help with writing in English. It is unfortunate that the quality of grammar also lowers the quality of the story, a person has to stop for a few seconds to understand what they are reading, ruining the immersion of the story. Improve the grammar and maybe this fanfic will become famous.
This chapter is giving me this super vibe! Good chappy
Yikes! That technique will be his favorite in his suicide attempts! I can already imagine the scene, where he accidentally learns to use this technique without dying, it will be glorious!
They were only villains in the story because in Fade's eyes they were his enemies, but after reading the kind of person Fade is, I like to think of them more as his victims than the villains in the story.
(And that's how Rio turned another villain character into a decent person...)
Reborn as an Extra
Fantasy · Calm_Mountains
At this point I can say without a shadow of a doubt that Sukuna is definitely a cockroach no matter how many times you squash him, he just won't stay down!
The story idea is interesting but the grammar kills any possible pleasure a person might have from reading this. I understand that not everyone can write English well, but there are free programs to improve grammar. So this story is not recommended to read.
Holly Molly , that man in flames must be stopped !
This line is perfect.
The war I was in, the death of my parents. The reason sick fucks like Gari of the Explosions could walk around freely was direct because Hogoromo couldn't grow a pair of balls and put down his rabid offspring.
Naruto: A Life On The Battlefield
Anime & Comics · CYANOMN1VORE