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10 months ago
Commented

thanks for the good story

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10 months ago
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Don't worry dude we readers can wait, you should prioritize your life rather than a simple fanfic and prioritize your health and well-being don't burn yourself out just for a couple of chapters.

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11 months ago
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It has an okay story and some good characters But it feels rushed and inhuman. Firstly why I feel it's rushed is because he has barely any customers, like he only had like 3 customers but is already receiving a rank up and a quest to make a branch store.Secondly, it feels like I'm reading a story made by AI, there just something about the story that makes it feel so inhuman The story feels like an AI trying to imitate what a human would write

11 months ago
Replied to OneArmedImmortal

Liked the old one

1 years ago
Posted

one of the best books on webnovel........

1 years ago
Commented

sorry for your loss

2 years ago
Posted

it a good story to read..................................................... .................................................................

2 years ago
Posted

amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing

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