oktubre1

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Faithful follower of the translator and web novels

2020-11-10 Joint Argentina
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oktubre1
oktubre1
1 months ago
Posted

good to have something to read. It gets boring the more you read as the protagonist keeps winning without any real challenge. Another thing is the lack of events outside of football that make reading entertaining.

oktubre1
oktubre1
1 months ago
Replied to Solascere

Fuck you

oktubre1
oktubre1
2 months ago
Commented

waiting for the next update

oktubre1
oktubre1
2 months ago
Commented

7 months without update. Did they abandon him?

oktubre1
oktubre1
2 months ago
Commented

This looks like the fifth chapter, not the first.

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oktubre1
oktubre1
2 months ago
Commented

I don't mind this turn of events, but was it necessary to use 4 chapters for a trivial sex scene?

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oktubre1
2 months ago
Commented

I don't understand how selling a couple of fruits and vegetables at a very low market price would make a big difference in the north.

oktubre1
oktubre1
2 months ago
Posted

He abandoned it in the fifth chapter, I don't understand why this amateur work has such a good rating. The only good thing about this book was its stability in updates, otherwise it leaves something to be desired.

oktubre1
oktubre1
2 months ago
Replied to Solascere

Oh, come on friend, if you had read at least half of the novel you wouldn't say that. you criticize for being annoying.