He's an idiot to trust so blindly after so many warnings from his brother. Specially since it's proven that they can't keep their mouths shut. hope MCs will get betrayed because of this mistake.
The overall story is good. but pure dumb nature of the MC is getting me. He has super OP items but conveniently "Forgets"
He's one to say. he literally passed good items because he didn't like magic
It was because of that kind of thing that Jake found it troublesome to play with non-gamers. Still, he couldn't deny their skills and the fact that their presence really sped up their hunting speed.
Unlimited Power 03: The Sinful Ruler
Games · ExSoldierLv99
Too many unnecessary adjectives and repetitive information. breaks the flow and doesn't get me worked up to continue reading. hope the author fixed that in the upcoming chaps.
I don't know how much more attitude I can handle.
Laughing in his mind 'Hehe, courting death.'
Multi-Gene
Sci-fi · Typhlix
Getting really unbearable to read with his attitude
David stared blankly at him for the whole duration of thirty seconds at a loss for words. As realisation hit him, he instantly wanted to roar out in rage! Was this guy joking with him? What did this guy take him for?
Multi-Gene
Sci-fi · Typhlix
i really liked the story. but the fact that the dragons didn't get any justice or bliss got away Scott free for killing Sen is a bit disappointing
I'm feeling second hand embarrassment
"Yeah you really need to bed, you're hallucinating now… unless… you're the only one who can see it! What does the screen say!" Said Voron, realizing that the stone tablet worked.
Inverse System
Fantasy · Wizzez
hasn't the author heard about show don't tell?
Additionally, Shang allowed her to rectify her earlier blunder.
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy · Warmaisach