"Do you think he is dead?"
Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI
Thanks for the review! Writing this is a learning curve for me, and you can see my inexperience especially in the first few chapters. I recognise that there are many faults in my writing, and you'll see a lot of inconsistencies throughout my writing at the moment. I will eventually take time to rewrite chapters that I'm not happy with, I hope you come back to this fanfic again and have a different opinion :) I appreciate the feedback ☺️
was a typo, cheers 👍
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Anime & Comics · DeezNuts_809
Gonna at least finish this ark before starting a new story. Ngl the way I have this story planned its probs gonna be quite a long fanfic so I'll need things to keep me motivated.
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Anime & Comics · DeezNuts_809
Yeah this is my way of killing off Vivi
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Anime & Comics · DeezNuts_809
But yeah, good point. May aswell not edit it though BC it'll delete your comment, it might educate some people
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Anime & Comics · DeezNuts_809
Ngl it didn't even cross my mind, but the undercompartment is separate from the main part of the fridge. Sorry If i wasn't specific enough 😂
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Anime & Comics · DeezNuts_809
Not planning on doing making any of them mistresses
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Anime & Comics · DeezNuts_809
Pretty sure that I already confirmed that Alice is part of the harem
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Anime & Comics · DeezNuts_809
I've been considering it! However, I feel as if I would be limiting myself in what I can write about the romance in the story. Maybe I will cut it down to three members. Idk yet
(AN: Remember to vote for the harem! The vote will remain open until the start of the Totsuki ark. Also, I'm assuming you guys are alright with there being R-18 scenes. I know the characters are 15-16 at first. It's kind of weird if you think about it.)
Food Wars: A Dropout's Redemption (Rewrite)
Anime & Comics · DeezNuts_809