Acerola_Orion

Acerola_Orion

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2020-10-15 Joint Global
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Acerola_Orion
Acerola_Orion
1 years ago
Replied to AbyssmalReader

heh, finally, someone has a brain. unlike others out there who couldn't comprehend the author's work. it is obvious that he wanted the readers to make assumptions

Acerola_Orion
Acerola_Orion
1 years ago
Replied to iyourgranddaddy

that's the point. to have the answer, you need to read more chapa

Acerola_Orion
Acerola_Orion
1 years ago
Replied to Lucas_Sousa_7129

huh, I think you are just too use reading novels where MC's are not panicking after dying, and realized they got isekai

Acerola_Orion
Acerola_Orion
1 years ago
Commented

I remember the scene in scary movie where the Female lead reached the ceiling due to c*M's strong pressure

'I was not holding in that much cum. . . no way.'

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Acerola_Orion
Acerola_Orion
1 years ago
Commented

try 1 chapter per 2 days but a bit longer. stress accumulates over time

Acerola_Orion
Acerola_Orion
1 years ago
Replied to Grandmasters

wow! you are funny . lemme grab some pop corn and die from choking

Acerola_Orion
Acerola_Orion
1 years ago
Replied to Acerola_Orion

it's an author doing his magic trick for MC's ship to sail. lots of widows are content to be a single parent. they are aware of other's feeling. they just don't reciprocate it.

Acerola_Orion
Acerola_Orion
1 years ago
Commented

for a depressed woman and still dreaming about her deceased husband, you'll never feel carnal love. speaking of realism, I feel disgusted for this MC. a woman knows a man's stare especially for someone who worked five years with her boss. kissing and hugging your boss? disgusting. you are not a widow with anxiety or depression

Acerola_Orion
Acerola_Orion
1 years ago
Posted

I'll rank this book as "rare" for uncommon to legendary or 6 over 10. Writing Quality: good enough. I don't remember using Google to define some words I don't understand. you need an editor. Story Development: respectable. like other books I have read. Character Design. not new. met someone in-game and IRL too? if there is an MC that never met their lover in-game/IRL please let me know. I read a novel where MC's lover is a plant. the ending was a tragedy. very simple which makes it unique. and depressing. Updating Stability: impressive. I wonder how stressful your schedule is. you have other works after all. World Background: nice. overall, I think I am reading another version of "A new world" to be honest, I thought the MC would quit her job and become a full-time mother. there's the age gap and work ethics to consider as the MC mentioned in early chapter. She is a widow, not a dumb teenager for not noticing Mark's feeling. I guess, romance is a hidden genre.

Acerola_Orion
Acerola_Orion
1 years ago
Replied to Drogan

everybody loves large chest! !! haha! man of culture too huh

"GRAAAAAAHHH!!!" The monstrous creature groaned angrily, as I saw its Status… This thing was a Hidden Boss too?! It was a Gluttonous Mimic King, and was Level 15! What the hell? It was almost the same level as Titan! Why? Wasn't this a low-level dungeon? Were we being bamboozled by the system of this game or something?

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