I have read upto 5 chapters , and i have noted that you use the term fighter to describe the dou realms , which confuses me greatly as it is hard to keep track of mc progress
it's confusing when you mix up the dou stages , and when you don't clearly mention it
Mist Shadow Booty - 1
Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
it's like reading a summary.no character depth 🙁
Average writing quality ,clashes with Naruto world concept.has no depth , overall a dull story not worth full rating given by others 😞
no bulma she is like a second mother to Gohan maybe caulifla
guys do you have any idea.i will mix it up...i mean u guys want bulma or not
GOHAN THE LEGACY
Anime & Comics · AR_LEGEND
author you keep mentioning waterfall as uzumaki village which is wrong ,waterfall village or also called as takigakure is in waterfall nation.this nation shares border with fire nation where leaf village is . uzumaki nation name is whirlpool nation .
i literally just got goosebumps reading this, excellent 👌
Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0