Bakari_Khalfani

Bakari_Khalfani

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2020-09-08 Joint Global
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Bakari_Khalfani
1 years ago
Posted

Really looking forward to new chapters. I really enjoy this novel and where the current story is now!

Bakari_Khalfani
Bakari_Khalfani
1 years ago
Posted

I would have given a complete five stars if the author made more chapters per week. Nothing more to say than just a perfect story. Really needs to be published to hard copy. This story has the potential for so much more and I think the author will provide. Just a nudge to the author, fans aren’t just fans because you give them what they want but because you give them what they need. And we need more chapters!! Lol

Bakari_Khalfani
Bakari_Khalfani
1 years ago
Posted

The story truly reads like an anime/show. I love the MC and the growth of the characters so far. Although I do hope that Light gets a little more love here soon. The story isn’t exactly original but the use of these “titles” are unique in a way and I think that the author is getting better at painting nice vivid mental images when needed. Side character perspective are nice also. I’ve read a little under 140 chapters and I’m hooked. Only things I would like to critique but not really is for the auther not to over look certain detail like items, powers, or emotions when going forwards in the story. We remember everything that happens or doesn’t happen. Keep up the good work. Also please throw Light a bone lol

Bakari_Khalfani
Bakari_Khalfani
1 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Bakari_Khalfani
Bakari_Khalfani
1 years ago
Commented

I want to say this is my first comment ever on this app and boy!! The emotion conveyed by the author is just perfect!! I mean perfect. If this ever gets to be an anime these chapters scenes better be top notch! I’m low key wondering where Light is at??

Bakari_Khalfani
Bakari_Khalfani
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Bakari_Khalfani
Bakari_Khalfani
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon