I'll just say that I loved the Shuck Norris joke. ........................................................... ,....................................................................................................................................
Dear author-san, as a recommendation I would add a section that has a list of the Pokémon that Ash captures. Also, if a recommendation is that some Pokémon that Ash forgot be treated better or even take them to a stronger point or give them a better ending, for example his butlerfly, instead of letting him go with the pink Pokémon, it is better to catch the rose so that they can stay at the professor's ranch, I say it will be better than any forest they can find in freedom. Another way to gain recognition is for Ash to use his knowledge to "discover" evolutions ahead of time, for example Annihilape, Kleavor, Wyrdeer. Just as a recommendation, the same author remembers that it is your story and we will respect your choice.
The only thing that raises doubts in my mind is how you will keep pitou alive, since her only purpose in life is to serve Meruem, she is not like the other ants since being a guardian of the king, her complete DNA is based on the protection of her king and when he dies, she will follow him too.
Missy
Before the snake girl joins the harem, I would give girls like Suno or Mai more chance. So that Krillin is not left alone, you can give him Colonel Violet as a partner, giving the same story as N18 about the bad girl who becomes good.
I got lost in Midoriya's response. I felt very simple, just saying I want things to change because I don't like the way they are. I was expecting something deeper, for example Spiderman's responsibility because the day he doesn't take it he will have to accept the consequences. Superman who is a symbol of hope but deep down it is because he wants the world to accept him out of the same sense of responsibility or Batman who is traumatized hahaha
I'll just imitate Deadpool and say "Poor wife" tremendous pair of balls of steel. Hahaha
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I like the system, I like that the MC is intelligent. I'm just uncomfortable with the fact that he's trying to pass for someone in the middle, making mistakes. It reminds me of Shadow Garden, for someone so intelligent it seems strange to me that he is not capable of living a striking life and at the same time one in the shadows hidden from everyone. But I like your story dear author-san, good luck
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original HxH: El Mercenario Piadoso
Esta sera una historia en el mundo de HxH, sera un cumplimiento de mis deseos, el protagonista seguirá sus deseos y tratara de meterse en la historia original. MC con moralidad, sera un mercenario reencarnado en HxH, vivirá tratando de ser el mismo, si bien es de buen corazón con los buenos, tambien es cruel con quien lo merece, es listo y si bien es bromista y le gusta hacerse el idiota, no lo es. HABRÁ HAREM Si bien sera mujeriego, intentare que sus relaciones sean creíbles aunque a mi parecer el sera algo manipulador. No soy dueño de ningún personaje de la historia que sea original de HunterXHunter8 Chs 28 Collections
Question, how integrated will he be into WWE development management? For example, the protagonist has a lot of knowledge of different superstars in the industry. Will he do things like recruit characters that he knows will be future superstars or help improve the characters ahead of time or prevent some superstars from quitting WWE?
Becoming A Wrestler
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