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Why son of Logan and Storm? some premise for the story, some idea of powers
I like stories about TBBT, and I've read a lot and it's rare that someone writes about a comedy series. Things I can recommend is that one of the main problems you will have is that many scenes in the series will not happen because you add another character. For example, Leonard and Penny's moments will not happen and that can leave you blank, things like the Penny and Raj scene, or that there is a reason for Leonard to move away from Sheldon to live alone, being so dependent on each other and without the intervention of someone with Penny's characteristics who can control Sheldon. On the other hand, the Oc adds scenes like the one in the previous chapter. Throughout the story some characters allow the development of others, for example if Leonard and Penny are not together, Howard might not know Bernadette, because if the OC is Howard's friend, you would need to develop a deep relationship for Howard to like him. ask for help and the OC accepts. You will need another character to fulfill Penny's role in Leonard's development.
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Malia es mejor ❤️🩹
First of all, very good chapter, second, I liked the thing about changing the Kalego professor for Nana as a rayquaza. When I was reading the chapter I was imagining scene by scene and it honestly took me by surprise, I thought it would follow the course of the familiar kalego, but I liked the ingenious change and it adapts to the story. They don't pay much attention and forget that Kalego's small form was due to Iruma's personality and desires. Not having the same personality and ideas made me a very good, correct and fair change. By the way, very good detail adds explanations, I imagined it like in the anime, very good detail. continue with the story and my best wishes author san
I always felt that Brook was missing pokemon like tyranitar, Rhyperior or some other strong card from the rock or ground group
Something I never understood is why they didn't help Misty get more water pokemon. I say he doesn't have any initial or flashy pokemon except his gyarados or his horse. Being able to help her get a squirtle, or the totodile she always wanted, or all the other starter pokemon or the strong ones like milotic
The story is going well, but the total rejection of the mention of Peter seems strange now. I know it wants to be another version but, it becomes somewhat strange.
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original HxH: El Mercenario Piadoso
Esta sera una historia en el mundo de HxH, sera un cumplimiento de mis deseos, el protagonista seguirá sus deseos y tratara de meterse en la historia original. MC con moralidad, sera un mercenario reencarnado en HxH, vivirá tratando de ser el mismo, si bien es de buen corazón con los buenos, tambien es cruel con quien lo merece, es listo y si bien es bromista y le gusta hacerse el idiota, no lo es. HABRÁ HAREM Si bien sera mujeriego, intentare que sus relaciones sean creíbles aunque a mi parecer el sera algo manipulador. No soy dueño de ningún personaje de la historia que sea original de HunterXHunter8 Chs 29 Collections
For me it is a good story, but if I want to see something new or different, it is the story of someone fulfilling their wishes in their favorite programs. It fulfills its purpose by entertaining and satisfying those moments in the stories in which we would like to intervene. It is not something new, nor with intrigues and moments of suspense or extreme changes in the plots, on the contrary it follows the plot with small modifications for satisfaction or added moments that replace other scenarios. great story boss
Modern Family: I want Freedom
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