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I'm quite a person with a peaceful mind.

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4 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

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4 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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4 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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pravikk
4 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

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pravikk
4 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

pravikk
pravikk
4 years ago
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thanks and i will correct it

We are five cute and happy living families in a big town with one small home consisting of 2 rooms. My father will always be out of the station because of his business to nourish us, and mom was basically to innocent to understand what life is.?, but still, she groomed herself and groomed us by teaching us morals and ethics.

TRIANGLE LOVE

TRIANGLE LOVE

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pravikk
pravikk
4 years ago
Posted

Hi Author, It's a nice plot about dreams and describing the way of portraying characters in the story and interesting beginning to start with..overall its a very interesting story...

pravikk
pravikk
4 years ago
Posted

Hi Author..I liked the way story has developed into the character and a small suggestion from my side, book cover looks nice but no clarity. SO think about it once if it changes then it will give more life into that... By the way, all the best with your writing author.

pravikk
pravikk
4 years ago
Posted

Hi Author, I'm so much into mafia background books because it has always some mysterious flashbacks for ML or FL. Like the same ML also looks so tough but he is soft from inside and I guess he to have Strong flashback on his childhood as you mentioned in the first chapter.I'm into this from now onwards... All the best Author.

pravikk
pravikk
4 years ago
Posted

Hi author, the first chapter itself it is very scary and the small town is very interesting, to begin with, the plot and I like how the progress of the chapter to the next chapter... Overall it's a good book. All the best author

  • TRIANGLE LOVE original

    TRIANGLE LOVE

    Fantasy ROMANCE SWEETLOVE

    4.6

    Jiang Ying Yue who was always a free-spirited girl looking forward to life which shows her a beautiful world beyond her imagination... unexpectedly in her smooth life, two persons will come to a stage to ask who she really needs and to continue the rest of her life with her. Will she choose one among those two important people in her life..will she give second chance to her first love or be with another one with whom she saw the life with a different vision...

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