ajustment?
language 😏
such a colorful world with rare colorful people 😅
haiz, crushing and rejecting, if one hasn't been in these situations, they will certainly be, at least once in their student ages 🤣
add a new chapter and change chapter type to axillary
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Syche: The Dark Element
Fantasy · SGBria
from here, i wanna talk about your writing style, not the story in general, it is uncommon to have a chapter that is 4 pages shorter, but i guess thats fine, but the sentences though, the way you write " , " is odd, usually, the punctuation should be ", " btw, some parts were repeated somewhere between chapter 1 and 2, hope you'll fix this :)
theres a feature, aka chapter 0 which allows you to write prologue ffs
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Syche: The Dark Element
Fantasy · SGBria
i remember web novel allows you to write the prologue specifically earlier, you don't need to add it to the first chapter :)
seeing those errors and skills tho. so far I felt like the characters are inside a game 🙂 btw careful with spacing and capital letters (of it was unintentional)
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original Coal and Diamond
In Ancient Greece, there was a dedicated spartan who later be reawakened in a world of dreams. After his wife's passing, he evolved into a more powerful being. A Titan. This prompted more issues, most of which were associated with divine beings. The warrior had to move from place to place. Eventually, he arrived in Egypt. What would his plan be?11 Chs 7 Collections
How about you keep writing until you either are blessed by the algorithm or join more competition?
Aiden got out of the taxi and looked around. His eyes reflected the scene of thousands of people gathered outside the Manhattan arena.
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