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Shylowdeath
Shylowdeath
9 months ago
Replied to Doom2106

Nope I'm still working on it... just very slowly . I'm about halfway through the next chapter. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for checking in and I hope you find lots of good stories while you wait. thank you !

Shylowdeath
Shylowdeath
10 months ago
Replied to TildaBardsdotter

it's also in a way part of her apology for calling him short .

"Mr. Bilbo," she said, glancing up at her father quickly. "Will you be my friend? I'd like to have a hobbit as a friend."

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

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Shylowdeath
Shylowdeath
10 months ago
Replied to TildaBardsdotter

You will have to keep reading to find out why Bard is not using his name. It's in chapter 58 if you are impatient. Most people will know that this is infact Bard, but they won't know why he's not using his proper or expected name.

Sara glanced behind them to where the bargeman, Ranson, stood with the elves near the back of the boat. She was a bit surprised to see Airidan operating the rudder rather than the man. Ranson's eyes caught and held her gaze and for a moment and Sara was taken aback by his face. The last truly human face that she had seen had been little Estel's and he was only 10 years old. Ranson's face stood out among the pointed features of the elves, clashed with Bilbo's round little face and seemed soft next to that of the dwarves. His face seemed bare in comparison save for the neat mustache and a small patch of hair beneath his lower lip lip and short stubble on his chin and jawline. She had almost forgotten what a human face could look like, that she was in fact not just another dwarf in the company. Despite her more delicate features and frame, her short height fit her well amongst the others, especially when draped in Thorin's over large coat.

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

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Shylowdeath
Shylowdeath
10 months ago
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I suppose it depends on the 9-10 year old. some of that age are very precocious and collect friends rather eagerly. Once again I have changed their ages to suit my story .

"Mr. Bilbo," she said, glancing up at her father quickly. "Will you be my friend? I'd like to have a hobbit as a friend."

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

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Shylowdeath
Shylowdeath
10 months ago
Replied to TildaBardsdotter

Because according to the Tolkien legendarium there is no set time for Bain's birth. There is also no mention of Bard having daughters . Those are additions from Peter Jacksons movies. So since there is no hard fast rule according from Tolkien himself I changed it to suit my story better. I you notice I do this quote alot throughout the story merging the books and all movies and and even after that tweaking it even more.

"Welcome to my home," said Ranson when most of the movement had ceased. "These are my children. Bain is 16," he pointed to the boy. "Sigrid is 15." He nodded to the other girl. "And of course my youngest Tilda who is almost ten."

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

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Shylowdeath
Shylowdeath
1 years ago
Commented

Yes it will continue. life's just been a bit crazy. The next chapter is half done.

Shylowdeath
Shylowdeath
1 years ago
Commented

Definitely more chapters to come, life has just been busy. Thanks for reading !

Shylowdeath
Shylowdeath
1 years ago
Replied to Frodo_Proudfeet

Yep! 60 years from the end of hobbit till Bilbo leaves the shire and another 17 after that when Frodo leaves the shire with the ring. Aragon was 87 during the LoTR so counting backwards that makes Estel 10 when the quest for Erebor happened .

"What are you doing here Estel?" asked Sara. He looked up at her fingering a small bow that was slung over his shoulder.

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

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Shylowdeath
Shylowdeath
1 years ago
Replied to Frodo_Proudfeet

yes it was. he's just a kid at this time. most people forget to calculate the (17?) year gap between Frodo and Bilbo's exodus at the beginning of LOTR. nice catch! if I ever get to the sequel he will be 20.

"What are you doing here Estel?" asked Sara. He looked up at her fingering a small bow that was slung over his shoulder.

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

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Shylowdeath
Shylowdeath
1 years ago
Commented

Thank you so much! I was doing some edits a while ago and must have reupload the wrong chapter. It should be fixed now . Thank you so much for letting me know happy reading !

  • The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC) original

    The Undecided Title of Sara Miller (Hobbit Fanfiction) (Thorin/OC)

    Book&Literature ROMANCE ADVENTURE

    "You need to know something," said Fili, taking her face in his large warm hands. "You will always have me. Even if the Valar take you away tomorrow, I will always be your brother. I want you. I'm going to fight Thorin for you, but even if I lose, you are always my sister. I would sooner stop being a dwarf than stop being your brother." Can exploring caves land you in a hobbit's pantry? It happened to Sara Miller. Taken from the 21st century, she must navigate through middle-earth to find a way back home. But to do so she will have to understand why the Valar have sent her in the first place, something even Gandalf does not know. All Sara wants to do is return home so she can resume the search for her family but now she is stuck going on this insane quest. Why are wizard's so capricious? Thorin has first-hand experience with one, namely Gandalf. Thorin is determined to reclaim his home in Erebor for his people and was even prepared to accept a hobbit on the quest. But now Gandalf insists that if he wants his help he must allow a woman from another world into his company as well. But just because the wizard brings her along doesn't mean Thorin has to play nice. Who is this woman anyhow and why is Mahal's mark on her hand?

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  • Berries, Boars, and a Boy (Httyd) (Snotlout/OC) original

    Berries, Boars, and a Boy (Httyd) (Snotlout/OC)

    Movies ROMANCE ADVENTURE FRIENDSTOLOVERS HTTYD

    "In a lot of ways, Snotlout is very much Spitelout's son," said Freda. Torben did not need to see her face to hear in her voice that she wanted to say more. "One can hardly help but notice," he said when she didn't immediately continue. "But," she added hesitantly. "In more subtle and quiet ways he is much more my son." Torben turned his face toward the sun, the heat of it warming his skin though his world remained dark. "Even without my sight I could see that. Why else do you think I would encourage and allow his frequent visits here." --- He was brash, cocky, and way too self-confident for it to be real but he had gotten her out of the tree. She was older than him, taller than him, and had an annoying habit of seeing through his bluffs but she had stitched him up. What happens when Sigyn and Snotlout strike up an unusual friendship? And what happens when Snotlout goes away to The Edge with the other Dragon Riders and she stays behind? Will their friendship remain intact, fade away, or possibly change into something neither was expecting? Just see if I don't make a Snotlout fan of you by the end. Story told from both Sigyn and Snotlout's POV.

    10 Chs 56 Collections

  • The Weight of Immortality *Servamp Fanfiction* (Sleepy Ash, Kuro/OC) original

    The Weight of Immortality *Servamp Fanfiction* (Sleepy Ash, Kuro/OC)

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE DARK SLICEOFLIFE TRAGEDY

    "Kuro, don't you have any subclasses?" asked Mahiru. "No," said Kuro. "Too… troublesome. The birth of a subclass happens when a person who is nearly dead or just died drinks sevamp blood… But, no one can tell if that human still wants to live, right? I don't understand and don't want to think about it. Too much trouble." But is that the whole story? Or is Sleepy Ash holding something back? Something about his past and the kid he fished out of a river. Something about the family he found, and then… lost. About a past Eve who he almost made into a subclass, could have made his subclass… but didn't. And why?

    1 Chs 11 Collections