Excellent first chap! I like it!
ive sent a message request. what do you want to talk about specifically?
yes I am!
amazing chapter. i like the pace
OKAY WHOA NICE CLIFFHANGERRR
"Klarissa is trying to protect you. You are the key to unlocking the ancient world's secrets," Pato said.
Fantasy · 00_Tariq
patted* 👀✨️
Pato chuckled, his bushy beard jiggling. " You say that all the time. But I think you might be right this time. If you continue this way, you'll make an excellent blacksmith." he parted Gillian on his back. Before turning to the other side of the forge to inspect the torches.
Fantasy · 00_Tariq
😭😂😂😂
"I have to wait for another 2000 years, wrench. Why was I born so late!?"
Fantasy · yukides_
Thank you so much! It is still a draft that I'm editing so I agree that it needs a lot of work, at least for the initial chapters!
😭😭😭 I swear it was autocorrect this time 😭😭
"I have to wait for another 2000 years, wrench. Why was I born so late!?"
Fantasy · yukides_
YO! THIS BOOK GOTTA BE OUT THERE! First chapter drew me in like the blackhole! Good job author! I'm deffo reading this along!
Eclipse of The Phantom Queen
Fantasy · Obaze_Emmanuel