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History · Nia_Mystique
Should have used her name here instead of she. That would indicate the end of the flashback
She gazed at the falling snowflakes, pulled her white fox cloak tighter around her, and walked towards the inner courtyard. Her steps were slow but grew more determined with each step.
History · Thousand Birch Fallen
Author: first Quinyan is in the bedroom with the bride. Then she is outside playing chess. Are the names correct?
"Big Sister! Big Sister!" Bai Jinzhi rushed in hastily, panting and placing a piece on the chessboard, fanning herself with her hand. "Big Sister, Qin Lang placed a white piece here, and everyone is cheering. Did he break it?"
History · Thousand Birch Fallen
Huddled not hurdled. It’s still amazing the difference one letter makes. Keeps a reader on tippy toes.
There were a few detectives present and some were hurdled together, discussing Shark.
Fantasy · 1cutecat
Chapter 9 is a repeat of chapter 8.
In time
The secretary who just came in dodged the flying phone on time before it hit him.
Urban · The_Sweet_Dumpling
Number of chapters is 77 but locked for purchase at 48. Really kills the reading vibe.
Didn’t works better than did
Pei Yansi didn't answer her question but instead asked, "Did I ask if you were hungry?"
Urban · Tushan Shui Shui
Okay, author. Really need to keep the names straight
By late afternoon, as the sun began to set, its golden-red light filled the world, spilling through the hospital room window and casting a glow upon Pei Yansi's face.
Urban · Tushan Shui Shui
Head over heels
"I ask because it's obvious that our girl is still over heels in love with him. It's a pity that he hasn't reciprocated her feelings." Grandma Mayfair exhaled loudly.
Reborn ghost seeing lady is pampered by her ex husband
Fantasy · 1cutecat