Veejay2000

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Veejay2000
2 years ago
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I say rewrite chap 10, why is the mc afraid of the X-Men when the same dude trained for years, tackled trials, the mountains on a whim but is second-guessing confronting the X-Men. Author do him right please. Your novel is okay, it takes wisdom and planning to write and we all improve with time so keep up the good work 👌

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Eternal in Marvel

Eternal in Marvel

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Veejay2000
Veejay2000
2 years ago
Posted

I've read some good novels, with fine character development and all that, but this is definitely making it top my top 3. keep up the great work

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Veejay2000
2 years ago
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Being Re-Written :)

Being Re-Written :)

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