i will stop. I know i won't like the rest i hate this kind of stories where they reveal things like reincarnation or that you are from another world...this kind of things need to be tightly kept secrets that you keep from anyone and everyone
Clara nodded, taking another elegant sip of her drink. "It was all quite a shock, really. One moment, we were in our world—going about our lives, quite normally—and the next, our home was... here."
GOT/ASOIAF:House In The Wastes
Book&Literature · greatcheesemaster
the whole chapter and we still don't know much about the other guys and even no historical background of who Elizabeth is...and no wise investor puts all his eggs in one basket even if you are sure bcz a small change can cause a butterfly effect leading to massive losses
why are you writing as if we know these guys already? and you could have also mentioned how much time has gone since winning the lottery
Ren Fujimoto sat in his new office at PrimeKick Investments, the walls still bare, the furniture modern but minimal. His team was small but full of potential—Scott, his future CEO, ambitious and sharp, and Anna, the cautious, calculated financial analyst he had brought on board. They had been running numbers all day, diving into potential investments, but Ren's mind kept drifting back to one stock that had stuck with him for years: Freedom Holding Corp. (FRHC).
Football Manager: Reborn
Sports · TundraHundredth
poorly written..the interaction are shitty all in all it's just really bad
it's average..the moment I read the first page it was average...the intro wasn't good at all..
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there reaction is absurd...at this time the war is still ongoing... they should immediately know that only Voldemort would want to kill someone and also make regulus that scared...the author didn't really think it through properly when writing this segment... it makes the characters seem stupid which they aren't...anyways goodbye
Melinda also felt a wave of panic after hearing Regulus speak about the death of her son. She cried out, "Who is going to kill my son? Don't speak such nonsense! Who is attacking us?"
Harry Potter, reborn into the Black family
Book&Literature · YATOOO
it was good at the beginning but it went downhill in just 2 chapters ..the mc became shitty and whole putting DC things was just another shitty thing
so this entire chapter no mention whatsoever about the cause of his death his parents and rest..like I have questions who massacred them and why??🤨🤨🤨🧐🧐🧐🧐😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨🫤
After the process was finished, Ichibe felt a pull from somewhere. He could have ignored the pull or broken the connection off, but he felt no ill will towards him, so he let himself be pulled.
The Monk in the MCU
Movies · Cedric_7512
then what is he apart from a simp... he is getting involved in her business,, the guy even tells her about his reincarnation and system just because she wants to know why he is helping her.... that is 200% a simp...fuck this shit am out
'Why am I even getting all worried for. We're not even technically dating. We fucked once, that doesn't mean she's my girlfriend… Well, Lucian did call her my mate. But that's besides the point. I'm acting like a total simp. I'll have to reign it in.'
Gaming In The Underworld
Movies · Vargr_the_Skald
i hate that he revealed that he is from another world casually like that to two strangers that he knew nothing about... that's stupid
GOT/ASOIAF:House In The Wastes
Book&Literature · greatcheesemaster