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Schlung
Schlung
2 months ago
Commented

it's impressive to me that he still hasn't made the connection to the mother in the beginning of the story with soul affinity which turned into a ghost

"Who and why?" Adam asked again, raising his brow questioningly.

I Refused To Be Reincarnated

I Refused To Be Reincarnated

Fantasy · Adamus_Auguste

Schlung
Schlung
5 months ago
Commented

internal astral cultivator --> refiner perhaps mystic refiner cant recall the exact name but astral is definitely not correct

"The Mystic Humans at the Dralh Sea are merely products brought by a power you already had." Inala snorted, "You had Internal Astral Cultivator. Even after surviving against Brandal Brimgan, you could have taken your time to elevate other Nature Weapons to the Mystic Grade. But you selected the Mystic Ewworm, since you were confident of taking advantage of its tool condensation capabilities."

I'll Surpass The MC

I'll Surpass The MC

Eastern · Anvelope

Schlung
Schlung
5 months ago
Commented

really not helping your story by first being inactive for week only to come back and expand the privilege tier

Schlung
Schlung
5 months ago
Commented

ear-->eye

Zarzelite, when refined fully, produced the Gold Grade mineral, Tratham. It had the property of gentle heat psychokinesis, able to unleash the effect of psychokinesis through heat and light. The heat was warm at best while the light wasn't ear-piercing. They merely acted as a medium to transmit psychokinesis.

I'll Surpass The MC

I'll Surpass The MC

Eastern · Anvelope

Schlung
Schlung
5 months ago
Commented

Déjà vu, I've just been in this place before Higher on the street, and I know it's my time to go Calling you, and the search is a mystery Standing on my feet, it′s so hard when I try to be me, woah

[DO NOT BUY, repeated Chapter 335]

Heaven's Greatest Professor

Heaven's Greatest Professor

Fantasy · EG0

Schlung
Schlung
5 months ago
Commented

he did announce a brutal cliffhanger but this wasn't too bad

"Because that's your name," the silver-haired girl said. "I'm Dawn, you don't recognize me?"

Heaven's Greatest Professor

Heaven's Greatest Professor

Fantasy · EG0

Schlung
Schlung
6 months ago
Commented

your-->my

"That's what your father made for you?" Jenni raised an eyebrow. "I thought it would be something more sophisticated than that."

Heaven's Greatest Professor

Heaven's Greatest Professor

Fantasy · EG0

Schlung
Schlung
6 months ago
Commented

you better hope THE Warden can contain some unruly fellows

"Let's enter the barrier and see if I can find a way to keep it restricted," he said and crouched down again. He began scratching out the rune formation on the ground. He even drew a few lines and runes for about a couple of hours before it was finally ready.

Heaven's Greatest Professor

Heaven's Greatest Professor

Fantasy · EG0

Schlung
Schlung
6 months ago
Commented

the speed of sound in air is 343 m/s 600 miles/h is 268 m/s math checks out

Their regular speed at which they moved before was about a hundred miles per hour, but currently, it was at least six times higher... practically the speed of sound...

Heaven's Greatest Professor

Heaven's Greatest Professor

Fantasy · EG0

Schlung
Schlung
6 months ago
Commented

weeklies will definitely kill the story. if people dont get the daily reminder you'll missout on so many powerstones and it has no upside for the reader so yeaah... together with how, to my knowledge, the webnovel algorithm works you'll have low exposure. you can of course test it but i firmly believe there's a reason why none of the successful books on here use this schedule