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Bye yennow the crew will always love you.

I liked it, It covers all the mini arc of Hinata and gives Insight in what is happening with the cursed people of the second branch.

It is very interesting, The relationship with The fallen angel Turned queen (Art Pen Lancer) and their daugthers is very promising, maybe we can read about their travels around the new world and how each one with their different personalities approach the situation,( a small paragraph or two for character doing their own thing as a sidenote from the thinking of the MC would be enough).

who is M arika?

What a great chapter, Now Naruto has all the secrets revealed to him, no more lies no more suffering for both Daiji and Naruto. all that is left is to keep walking their ninja 600km/hr avenue.

It is a Fact that Daiji is his best Waifu!. Naruto now has the thousand Ninjutsu, and with the forbidden scroll that Daiji recorded he can go even further.

And now Naruto is sbeing fast and efficient, this "Fast" pacing is real good, oh and I liked the demostration of prowess back then from naruto it was cool the disruption of chakra. Maybe it will be more powerfull with a bettere chakra control trained by the best at it "Tsunade Senju".

fast and effective again. Daji is rolling the wheel all by herself.

Fast and to the point, Daji doesn't play games, she makes the rules!

that is an army killer move just there, and there is no kill as the OVERKILL!!

1) A devil and an Ice Queen "as the bond with the upper "divine" realm". 2) Quingyue as his conection with the childhood and all the bluestar planet. 3) Kaguya "as the connection with all the divine in the world of Naruto" ---The new kyuubi can be also a bond with the gods from the world of ATG.

Hi, I am late but some interesting characters are: The real devil empress with the true god soul, and the Ice divine master that shares a soul with her (Maybe you can count "both of them as just one person"), Qinyue (at this chapter it seems like a stable Childhood Sweetheart), In the late chapters of this book: Kaguya (when he is all grown up and powerfull).

That Hydra Dragon is Absolutely the Goat.

This chapter Puts a closure to many, many things. I love chapters like this one, thanks to you for posting it!! now I enjoy reading this.

I am Still Grieving for the Crewmate. F Yennow.

Poor yennow. I did not Imagined that this would happen after mentioning the big wave in the previous chapter. feels bad. he was the companion of Urouge initially?

Very well written, but Shiki is about to become a Fried Lion - Eagle, how big of a tsunami would his pirate island generate after crashing at the sea? marineford like?

Indeed strong pirates like shiki and Whitebeard does not have kids of their own. I like more the approach from charlotte Lin lin

I feel in love with this Fanfic. it has comedy and action. Thank you