Chris_Hubbird

I happen to agree with the Review from User James_Horn now i did not count but each chapter felt like 500 ish words which is not bad for a one shot, but for a full fic i personally expect 1k words at least per Chapter, Plot is kind of interesting if only because i feel Skylynx is rather faithful to His portrayal in the Netflix Show Transformers War For Cybertron. Now for Future plots and what not all i can really say is Figure out what timeline you are using Legends or Disney Canon or Both then figure out what Skylynx would do you are kinda doing that already i personally am of the thought that Skylynx the Vain Creature he is would stop at nothing to rebuild his body then its kind of anyone's guess, probably get setup so he has his needs meet so Energon , Shelter uh Space Station of some kind , Parts to repair himself i guess. And remember Writing like all hobbys is in fact a hobby take breaks and have fun

so the only thoughts I have are SLOW THE FUCK DOWN but good job good sir its just not my cup of tea and If ya ever finish your book I might give it a read don't really care for sci-fi which seems so be what you are writing so eh but overall good job sir or siret

Good story wish there were more chapters but overall a good book Good story wish there were more chapters but overall a good book Good story wish there were more chapters but overall a good book