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I'm not sure, but I notice a lot of AI, literally the guy keeps repeating "it's our big goal" "this brings us closer to our final goal" all that is obvious AI, the Mc has the powers of fucking Thor, it doesn't matter what version, Thor is stronger than Homelander, the first chapters are garbage, he says he needs straightening treatments and a source of information, I mean what shit, he literally knows that they live in a giant tower, without a doubt this has too much AI, and if he had wanted to develop the story it would have been with less strong characters and more gradual or expand the TB universe, without a doubt a good idea and initiative, but terrible management.
Well, good writen and we get chapters fast, but all of that power and he only di that? Ok ok, it’s ok, but the badddd thing was the story of Elia, likeee wtf? Yunkai? Spy master? Wtf? Another thing it’s that the author delete the bad comments
Wtf? 8 years and do all those things? 9 years and get a pub? Also anyone discober that? This story is really bad, don’t lose your time reading this.
Horrible escritura, 10 guardias reales? Un sable de luz corta el acero como cuchillo caliente atravez de la mantequilla, el personaje es raro, primero serio y alegre? Luego asustado y más?, buena idea de Vic pero horrible escritor y desarrollo.
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MTL - Chinese trash, got a grade of medical, but not has history subject like requisority is WTF, so the story is unreal, he had to read about HYDRA, CA and stark, so the story is a @“$&@
Ashara, Cersei and Catelyn
Can you tell the stories?
After the Last Dawn - TWD
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