Thanks for the chapter
ch 69 Year Three - Chapter Twenty
Book&Literature · OmnipresenceBeing
Thanks for the chapter
ch 0 3 Death and Domain - Chapter 3
Book&Literature · PathLiar
ch 60 Year Three - Chapter Eleven
Book&Literature · OmnipresenceBeing
Great story thanks for the capter
ch 54 Year Three - Chapter Five
Book&Literature · OmnipresenceBeing
I think that you should also choose the characters in base at their different qualities. And it should be better to choose apostles that lived far in the history. So they will be OP at the start of the MCU with all the time passed.
ch 0 -2 Apostles
Movies · mark_kiple
Thanks for the chapter
ch 57 Interlude: Babylon
Movies · mark_kiple
Nice! The real war starts now! I would like if the people see him in the face just because so in the legends people will have a description of him kind of similar. And also if you look like a statue of a god, people won't think that you're that god so will be fine for the future.
ch 45 Chapter 42: Beware, the rage of the Unseen One. 1193 BCE
Movies · mark_kiple
We want a slaughter, a tragic ending of this war, legends and Pluto getting really angry !!!
ch 44 Chapter 41: Worries of the Prime Eternal, 1193 BCE
Movies · mark_kiple
I'm waiting for a few of Asgardian warriors to swear loyalty to MC during the war.
ch 38 New God of Sky
Movies · DarknessAuthor
I really like this series till now, I just think that should happen something to convince the MC to train harder and grow strong enough to survive at the crisis. I was thinking at a fight with the others eternals once all the deviants are gone, maybe he forming an organization like kamartaj. This is just a random idea your doing great thanks for the novel!
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Movies · mark_kiple
The lords are scheming to earn John's favour? Or is John behind the plan?
ch 99 The plan (2)
Movies · thelightedghost
I don't like so much how you told this ark. Using a "villain" POV during all the ark and the final plot twist of Quinn that knew everything. I miss a little following Quinn and finding the conspiracy with him. It's just a suggestion ignore my comment if you feel like it. I really like this novel thank you so much for writing it!
ch 198 Got you! Or did you?
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
Indeed, maybe a charm for boosting his mind a short time? Perfect for fighting
ch 0 9 Flying Lessons and the Letter
Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee
Thanks for the chapter
ch 41 There Was Only One Truth
Eastern · Abundance Every Year
appreciate the work behind it