PilgrimJagger

PilgrimJagger

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PilgrimJagger
PilgrimJagger
8 hours ago
Replied to DaoistFiWeMm

The book is under rework

PilgrimJagger
PilgrimJagger
8 hours ago
Replied to DaoistFiWeMm

The book is under rework

PilgrimJagger
PilgrimJagger
8 hours ago
Replied to DaoistFiWeMm

The book is under rework

PilgrimJagger
PilgrimJagger
8 hours ago
Replied to DaoistFiWeMm

The book is under rework

PilgrimJagger
PilgrimJagger
10 days ago
Replied to Evan_Hartwig

And no, he disappeared two years earlier

They knew who he was—the trashy son of Lucius Romano. How a man of such stature and importance have a so useless son was behind them. One thing was clear, though, that the kid's father disappeared two years prior.

BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

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PilgrimJagger
PilgrimJagger
10 days ago
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Disappeared doesn't mean he is dead.

They knew who he was—the trashy son of Lucius Romano. How a man of such stature and importance have a so useless son was behind them. One thing was clear, though, that the kid's father disappeared two years prior.

BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

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PilgrimJagger
PilgrimJagger
12 days ago
Replied to Gatekeeper705

Eh... I have to see if it is possible first. The book has internal rules to follow.

PilgrimJagger
PilgrimJagger
12 days ago
Replied to Gatekeeper705

No, don't worry. I know the first part of the book needs revision. I'm currently doing that, it's just that to get to the last chapters I would need a year at least. Pacing had been my bane for a while, but that's because writers and readers have two different perception of it. For writers everything seems rushed, for readers everything looks slow.

PilgrimJagger
PilgrimJagger
14 days ago
Replied to Gatekeeper705

Meh. I'm saying this because I know how things work here, and I know where the plot is going. There are better elemental powers out there. As I said, ranged powers are vastly better than melee ones, the reason he didn't do as you suggest is because Erik wanted to merge the power with something else. I can't really reply without spoiling. Let's just say he will merge that power, but with something better.

PilgrimJagger
PilgrimJagger
16 days ago
Replied to Gatekeeper705

They may, but keep in mind what I said in previous chapters. The most common powers are those that allow to create mana weapons. Then there are those like Mira's, who can slightly manipulate air currents to change her arrows trajectory. So, it is not like there aren't quirky powers, it's just they would not be beneficial to him, since most of the stuff the other powers can make, he can too. Besides, that would also add a lot of things to do, because he would have to make neural links for them, and he barely has the time to make them for those he already has.

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    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

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    Utterly mad and consumed by hatred, Sebastian attacked Erika Luttrell’s manor. As the woman incinerated him to ashes, Sebastian died with a crazed smile on his face, finding humor in his own death. But fate had a wild twist in store for Sebastian. Thanks to a trinket bequeathed by his dead father, the pyromancer gets sent back to the past, landing right in the middle of another shot at payback. There is only a tiny insignificant problem plaguing the man. Madness followed him, pushing him to take completely avoidable risks. With a grin on his face, and flames in his hands, Sebastian will make those who ruined his family pay and turn into cinders all the thespians within the mystical realm who gave him his powers. --------------- RELEASE SCHEDULE: Two chapters a day UNLESS I have real life stuff to attend. CHAPTER LENGTH: 1000-1200 words long chapters. --------------- TAGS: #Skill Creation #Alternative World #Regression #Mad MC #Male MC #Western Fantasy If you want to share some thoughts or have a chat with me, you can join the discord's server here: https://discord.gg/dZpb4TBRJc

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